Wednesday, June 9, 2010

NEON SHOWER


Too long I have waited for you
My face is a river always
Not certain what I should do

It arrives soon
I will be waiting at the station
Feeling over the moon

I thought I wouldn't miss it
Your constant chatter and kisses
Now I know we are a perfect fit

5 comments:

  1. "I thought I wouldn't miss it
    Your constant chatter and kisses
    Now I know we are a perfect fit"

    I like this line. It makes think of when you don't realize what you have till its gone. Great Poem.

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  2. Thank you so much Robert! I am glad you enjoyed it. It was really hard sharing this poem, only because there was so much emotion surrounding it.

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  3. Goodness, you are darling. Your poems are so delightful, your visuals immaculate. I adore you. Please visit mine sometime, I would really appreciate your feedback.

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  4. Oh! Hello, lovely.
    Your comment was so kind. You have the warmest soul. Thank you, a hundred times, thank you. I love your feedback, it's nice to have insight, you know? Keep in touch, doll.

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  5. i especially like this illustration...nice!

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